Some people think that cars should be banned from large cities. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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a dramatic increase in private transportation around the globe over the

last

few years. Increased wages, economic prosperity and depletion in vehicle prices made it easy for

people

to have their own personal

car

.

However

,

this

has led to various detrimental issues including congestion, pollution and safety. For those reasons, I believe that limiting the

number

of

cars

in bigger

cities

could mitigate those problems. Completely banning

cars

in big

cities

is not a plausible solution as it is unrealistic,

however

, restricting the

number

of

such

private

cars

would be an effective solution indeed. Nowadays, traffic

contributed

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a lot to widespread pollution.

Car

smoke, traffic jams and loud horns of vehicles are

few

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reasons that significantly affect the environment and

people

in many ways.

People

are more vulnerable to various diseases and many have serious health issues

due to

pollution. In order to tackle these issues,

restriction

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on private

car

ownership should be imposed. Not allowing

people

to drive their

cars

in big

cities

is not possible

while

it is much reasonable to restrict the

number

of

cars

a family can own, the

number

of minimum

passenger

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on

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each

car

while

driving would be the two pragmatic solutions.

Additionally

, in order to combat traffic congestion, new road infrastructure has been introduced by various nations that include deforestation to acquire more space to build new roads, modern bridges and pedestrian pathways. Those development works could destroy the natural habitat of various species

that

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could lead towards the extinction of

them

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from

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various countries.

Nevertheless

, prudent decisions should be taken to enhance the

number

of roads without doing any harm to the natural environment.

On the other hand

, personal vehicles are more convenient and safer than other means of transportation.

This

is not surprising that

people

often feel more comfortable and relaxed

while

driving their

cars

. Completely banning the use of private

cars

in

cities

would deprive

people

to travel freely and

according to

their own

preference

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.

To sum up

, controlling and restricting vehicles in large

cities

would definitely play a pivotal role in improving

people

’s health and would

also

help in controlling factors that are the cause of the deteriorating situation of the environment. But banning private

cars

completely in big

cities

is not a pragmatic solution in my opinion.