In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.
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expectancy
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taxes
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, if foreign folk tend to move into other countries , Linking Words
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the tax rate would be balanced to a great extent .
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taxes
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and encourage immigration .Use synonyms
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