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Som people think that the teenager years sre the happiest of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities.  Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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It's a saying that, youth is the period of imagination and
this
 is the time between childhood and early adult age.
Hence
, I think
both
 stages have their own excitement, happiness and striving. Some people believe that teenage
years
 are much better than
adult
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. Particularly,
this
 is drawn from the fact that teenagers have lack
of
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responsibility and are majorly supported by their parents
both
 financially and emotionally.
However
, in
late
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 teenage
years
, juveniles are considered old enough to take up some part-time job; along with their future studies and career.
Furthermore
, we cannot neglect that they live more
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carefree
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care free
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 and enthusiastic
life
 than
the
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adults; with active social
life
, simply hanging out with friends or making new
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 without any restrictive mindset.
On the other hand
, it is often argued that
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adulthood is way better than these immature
years
. With the sense of maturity which gives great confidence to
take
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make
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 decisions or judgment in all areas of
life
; adulthood brings
more
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 contented
life
.
Hence
,
this
 helps in building long-lasting friendship and
more
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stronger relationships. The experience gained in these
years
 become the wealth of
life
 and helps in challenging ourselves and striving to achieve success.
Lastly
, in my
opinion
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both
the
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stages of
life
 are pivotal for anyone and have their own sort of happiness.
For instance
, the excitement of
first
 love cannot be compared with any
relation
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;
however
, the importance of intense relation cannot be completely understood and cherished in teen
years
 than in adult
life
.
Hence
both
 are equally important, though I look back to my teenage
years
 as the most joyous and bright
years
 of my
life
.
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