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Some people believe that the best way to increase road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving cars. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In the ultra-modern epoch, it is a point of debate that
people
 show less interest to talk with their parents and relatives as compare to the past.Undoubtedly,
this
 notion remains successful in keeping the majority in its favour but I agree with
this
 statement up to a certain extent.The subsequent paragraphs would elucidate multifarious factor in support of my argument.
Firstly
,
people
 become very workaholic and money-minded ,
therefore
, they spend their most of
time
 on jobs. They are giving preference to making money rather than their parents or children. Owing to
this
 , they do not have sufficient
time
 to sit with their family members for general communication.
Secondly
, due to modernization , most
families
 become nuclear
instead
 of joint
families
 due to
this
 all member of these
families
 busy in their own life and they hardly get
time
 to meet each other.
Moreover
, the habit of unnecessary use of the internet affects every individual’s life.
For example
, if all family members are present at home but prefer to use social media on their mobile phones rather than to communicate with their relatives. They are giving preference to talk online as compared to face to face meetings. Contrarily, despite various factors, most
people
 are eager to talk with their parents but due to a busy schedule ,they prefer communication through phone calls.
Furthermore
 , most the
families
also
 doing get together on weekends and they like to spend
time
 with each other. To recapitulate, I personally believe that
people
 are still willing to talk with their nearest and dearests but due to complex lifestyle , they prefer communication through audio or video calls.
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