Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co- operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is widely believed that

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should be taught to be competitive.

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, there are some people who are against

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view,

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they propose that

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should be educated about how to be cooperative.

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essay will discuss both these views and will provide my own opinion. On the one hand, boosting a

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of

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in

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in certain areas might be beneficial.

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the case of

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who practice sport, where a

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of

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is completely needed. Recent studies have proven that

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who have a competitive spirit are more likely to have better results in sports, obtaining

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positions in

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and winning titles.

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, when it comes to educational purposes, it is worthy to create a

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of

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in them, because they might potentially improve their academic performance and grades. If

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learn how to be competitive from an early age, the same academic results could be obtained once they start university or

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studies.

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, avoiding

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to be competitive might have better outcomes in their later life. Since a

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of

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might boost some bad values

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as envy and anger, some parents prefer not to teach their

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about it. While

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might not teach

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how to lose or be in the

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place, co-operation teaches them how to be comfortable if someone else overcome them at studies, work or sports competitions at the same time that teaching them how to help others to get better results or succeed.

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, there might be a point in their life where they will be part of a work or class group and to fit in it, co-operation will be the foremost value. In conclusion, a

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of

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is useful in some aspects of

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' life.

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, it would be better if

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are taught to have a limited

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of it. In my opinion, co-operation is essential in our lives and compared with the

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, is of more importance and relevance in our lives.