An increasing number of professionals such as doctors and teachers are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What are the problems associated with and some possible solutions?
In recent years, professional workers leaving their state to find a better life have become a subject of considerable debate and analysis. In
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essay, we will discuss the Linking Words
problems
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solutions.
As a number of professionals Linking Words
such
as doctors and teachers are leaving their own poor countries to work in developed countries, several related Linking Words
problems
can be anticipated. The main issue is that there will obviously be more poor people without the right medical check. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the quality of health care will decline and with it, hospitals will slowly shut down. The same will happen to the education system, with the best teachers overseas education will be weak, and young people will lose the opportunity to learn. Linking Words
As a result
, the quality of life would crash. Linking Words
For example
, back in Italy in my town, doctors left because the Linking Words
government
did not give them the right wage, so our local hospital, for a few years, was managed by nurses who tried to do their best until the Use synonyms
government
decided to close it and made the patients driving more than one hour for reach the next care service.
There are several actions that the Use synonyms
government
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problems
described above. Use synonyms
Firstly
a simple solution would be using the incoming tax to raise the wages of professional workers so as to not make them go away. A second measure would be for the Linking Words
government
to encourage people to stay in their country with special treatment regarding important figures Use synonyms
such
as doctors and teachers.
By way of conclusion, various measures can be taken to tackle the Linking Words
problems
that are certain to arise as richer states ask more and more worker for their development.Use synonyms
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