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some people think that the internet makes a person more sociable while other think it makes a person less sociable. discuss both views and give your opinion?

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In today's world, the
Internet
 is one of the biggest inventions of the century. There are reasons why some
people
 think that the
internet
 has made
people
 less sociable whereas there are others who think that with
this
 new technology
people
 are becoming more sociable. I will discuss my views about both opinions in
this
 essay. In my point of view, I think the
internet
 has made
people
's life so much easier. With the help of the
internet
,
people
 can talk to anyone around the globe by sitting in their houses. There are reasons why
people
 avoid going out to meet other
people
.
Firstly
, with the advent of new technology
such
 as smartphones, tablets and gaming laptop,
people
 get so involved in them that they spend their most of their time on
this
.
For example
, my brother loves to play games on his laptop. Due to
this
, he hardly goes out with his
friends
. He spends most of the time playing games on the laptop.
On the other hand
, with the help of the
internet
 one can attend any social event and meet new
people
.
For instance
, I always like to attend any social event happening in the town to meet new
people
.
Besides
this
, there is so many application
such
 as Facebook, Twitter, Instagram, where
people
 can make new
friends
. I have made hundreds of new
friends
 using these applications not just in my own country but
also
 in other countries.
In addition
 to
this
, If I don't get a chance to go out and meet those new
friends
, I try to arrange a video conference. With ,
this
 we can all gather in a single place without going out. In conclusion, I think we should properly use the new technology and spend some time outside with
friends
 and family.
Although
,
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 we can talk to
people
 over the
internet
, it is always better to go outside and talk to
people
 face to face.
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