Most people agree that money cannot be happines. Why is happiness difficult to find? How can people achieve happiness?

An increasing number of

people

believe that

money

and

happines

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happiness

can not be associate with each other. Happiness is a feeling that depends on the needs of an individual and

this

make it difficult to define. There are

diversity

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ways

which

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people

can attain contentments. The issue of contentments is subjective and complex to determine

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because everybody has their own image and insight of it. And it depends on their thoughts and outlook.

For instance

, for some

people

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the main source of happiness is

money

, because, they can meet the needs via it

such

as expensive clothes, cars and high-quality house. They put

money

over other things, whereas for some delight can be brought by having family, friends and relatives. There are a variety of ways that can help humans to be owners of exhilaration,

in other words

, doing hobbies

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make them happy.

For instance

, there are a lot of actors who acquire

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amount of

money

. It does not matter for them, because they enjoy their job and have a wish to express their imagination and ideas through the job. Despite

of

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this

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facts, there are some kinds of

people

for whom salary is crucial,

that is

, if their income increases, it makes them satisfied and pleased.

However

, the rest

people

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accomplish bliss by soul mates, making friends. In summary,

although

there might be several factors to attain happiness, it depends on

people

's perception and feelings.