Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research,business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.

Information

could be shared with the

world

to make them known and transparent. Some

also

prefer to share important

information

freely. I believe in both sides. In the technology

world

, for keeping the purpose clear, they share the

information

with the

world

,

therefore

they can be mentally prepared about it what will they use in future. For ,example tech giant Google announces their product in the Google I/O every year where they generify about their goods to let the user knows what are they going to be used and seen. It has so many positive impacts in my opinion

such

as

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the company clear their position about their product transparency.

Second

of all,

this

has been known for most of the persons who will use

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it, so there has no hidden secret. In general, I would like to share as much as possible to define myself clearly and they have the rights to know about it.

On the other hand

, some important things should be shared freely. Suppose, common

people

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don't know what's happening in the Galaxy or outside of the

world

. How actually Milkyway,

galaxy

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is working. For getting

information

about those there are some organization like NASA, SpaceX, etc. They are pulling the

information

by their research and letting know the peoples. Every day we see on the news that NASA has to

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something valuable from the moon. They are not only getting it

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they are

also

spreading the

information

with us, so that, we can

also

be concerned about it and can estimate about the future universe. if they didn't telecast or broadcast that important news we would never know about the moon, galaxy, and so on. They are freely spreading the

information

for humankind. In my opinion, Both views are important to make it clearer and transparent. ,

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in some cases, we will be unknown. So, it's very important to spread the

information

freely as well as should be spread important

information

more freely. At

last

, Spreading the

information

is kind of letting us know

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things about the

world

. We can learn from and understand from the

information

that has been shared to increase our curiosity.