Some people think that the best way to reduce the crime is to gibe longer prison sentences. others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime. Discuss both the views and provide your opinion

Many people believe that
lengthier
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jail
period can reduce the
crime
rate. others,
on the contrary
, thinking that there are other methods
such
as
rehabilitation
and education in
jail
can
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that can
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reduce
crime
in society. In my opinion,
longer
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the longer
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prison
sentence
can reduce
the
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crime
.
This
essay will discuss
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the views in forthcoming paragraphs. To commence with, Others and I as well believe
time
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the time
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period of
jail
after committing
crime
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a crime
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should be lengthier. When criminals stay in
prison
for
longer
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a longer
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duration of their
sentence
their mindset can be changed. They will realise their fault
in
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this
time and will not
crime
after release from
jail
.
For instance
, In Norway,
prison
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sentence
of
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any
crime
is
minimum
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a minimum
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of 15 years. With
this
, people of
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feel safe and
also
there is less chance of again committing
crime
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a crime
the crime
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.
On the other hand
, some people think there are other ways
such
as
rehabilitation
and education in
prison
to reduce
crime
.
Rehabilitation
will calm criminals
mind
and they will quit the
crime
.
Moreover
, some believe that when a person will educate and earn his bread
then
there will no need to commit
crime
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a crime
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. Government should
also
provide some small loan to establish a small scale business so that everyone can earn
then
there will no need to commit
crime
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a crime
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. To conclude, In my opinion,
Lengthier
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a Lengthier
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jail
sentence
will help to change the offender's
mind
. When a criminal
spend
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most of the part of his life in
jail
his
mind
will change.
On the other hand
, other think
rehabilitation
and education can change the
criminals
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criminal's
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mind
.
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