Some people think that the best way to reduce the crime is to gibe longer prison sentences. others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime. Discuss both the views and provide your opinion
Many people believe that
lengthier
Correct article usage
a lengthier
jail
period can reduce the crime
rate. others, on the contrary
, thinking that there are other methods such
as rehabilitation
and education in jail
can
reduce Correct pronoun usage
that can
crime
in society. In my opinion, longer
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the longer
a longer
prison
sentence
can reduce the
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apply
crime
. This
essay will discuss with
the views in forthcoming paragraphs.
To commence with, Others and I as well believe Change preposition
apply
time
period of Correct article usage
the time
jail
after committing crime
should be lengthier. When criminals stay in Add an article
a crime
the crime
prison
for longer
duration of their Add an article
a longer
sentence
their mindset can be changed. They will realise their fault in
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at
this
time and will not crime
after release from jail
. For instance
, In Norway, prison
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the prison
sentence
of
any Change preposition
for
crime
is minimum
of 15 years. With Correct article usage
a minimum
this
, people of country
feel safe and Add an article
the country
also
there is less chance of again committing crime
.
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a crime
the crime
On the other hand
, some people think there are other ways such
as rehabilitation
and education in prison
to reduce crime
. Rehabilitation
will calm criminals mind
and they will quit the crime
. Moreover
, some believe that when a person will educate and earn his bread then
there will no need to commit crime
. Government should Add an article
a crime
the crime
also
provide some small loan to establish a small scale business so that everyone can earn then
there will no need to commit crime
.
To conclude, In my opinion, Add an article
a crime
the crime
Lengthier
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a Lengthier
jail
sentence
will help to change the offender's mind
. When a criminal spend
most of the part of his life in Change the verb form
spends
jail
his mind
will change. On the other hand
, other think rehabilitation
and education can change the criminals
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criminal's
criminals'
mind
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