Many people are now working from home every day instead of travelling to the office What are some of the advantages and disadvantages of this for workers and employers? Discuss your ideas and support them with reasons and examples

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It's certainly true that a big sector of the population prefers to

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from their houses than

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, not all the effects of

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innovation have been positive,

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, there are certainly some advantages. There are several drawbacks to working from

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rather than going to the

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office. A common criticism of online

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is that sitting in one place for the whole day will lead you to feel bored as you stay in the same room alone without meeting your friends,

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, the employee feels tired as he sits in the same place without moving,

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, during COVID-19 a survey for UAE teachers has been conducted and the results made a shock as most of them feel sleepy during online classes. another negative aspect is that most online

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provide a lower salary than

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, many companies during COVID-19 deduct a part from employee's salaries regarding working from their homes. In spite of these negatives, working from

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has brought many benefits as well. One

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advantage is that online

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save time more than

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, the employee who works online has more time to spend with his family than those who

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as they will not drive to

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. Another advantage is that online

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will save

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as you will not spend

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on transportation,

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, employees can eat inside their homes, which will not only lead to saving

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only, but to becoming healthier as well. In conclusion,

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there are obvious drawbacks to working from

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, there are some advantages. I prefer to

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from

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so I can spend more time with my family and save

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Your essay has a logical structure, but there are areas that can be made clearer. Both the introduction and conclusion are present and adequately summarize the main points. You might consider connecting your ideas more fluidly between paragraphs and within them to enhance coherence.

task achievement

You've provided a complete response to the task, covering both advantages and disadvantages. However, your ideas could be expressed more clearly and could be better supported with relevant, specific examples. Try to expand on your points with more detailed explanations or additional examples.

coherence cohesion

Good that you have both an introduction and a conclusion, summarizing the points effectively.

task achievement

You've addressed both sides of the issue, discussing both advantages and disadvantages of working from home.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

283 words

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Many people are now working from home every day instead of travelling to the office What are some of the advantages and disadvantages of this for workers and employers? Discuss your ideas and support them with reasons and examples

Fully explain your ideas

With the growing population of cities, more and more people live in homes that have little or no outdoor area. Is this a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

More and more people are using computers and electric devices to access information, therefore there is no need for printed books, magazines and newspapers. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (Technology)

Coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities

Write a letter to the manager of the HR department of a company requesting information about the interview that you attended but still waiting for results. In your letter, * describe the position you applied for * why you think the interview went well * why you need the result of the interview

Your local travel agent recommended a place to visit and you are now having a good time there. Write a letter to your travel agent and tell them the following: what you have been doing; what you hope to do before the end of your holiday; say why you like this place.