Some people think that we can use as much fresh water as we want. Others think that fresh water supply should be controlled strictly by governments as the sources are limited. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The Earth is ninety
percent
Change the spelling
per cent
show examples
surrounded by
water
,
still
Add a comma
,still
show examples
only
one fourth
Add a hyphen
one-fourth
show examples
of it can be used for human consumption. For years, there has been an ongoing debate between people who believe
this
limited supply of
fresh
Correct your spelling
freshwater
show examples
water
should be managed by the authorities while others argue that
use
Correct article usage
the use
show examples
of
such
natural resource should be not restricted. In
this
essay, we will consider both the aspects and
finally
I will present my opinion.
Firstly
, considering
fresh
Correct your spelling
freshwater
show examples
water
as a natural resource it can be said that every human has
equal
Correct article usage
an equal
show examples
right to utilize it as per his requirement.
Moreover
, the control totally given to the authorities may lead to some corrupt
practises
Replace the word
practices
show examples
.
For instance
, The officials in Assam, a state in India
where
Replace the word
were
show examples
suspended for supplying fresh
water
to various soft drink companies for profit. There
has
Change the verb form
have
show examples
been
also
cases where rich metropolitan are supplied more
fresh
Correct your spelling
freshwater
show examples
water
than their neighbouring villages.
On the other hand
, though it is argued that natural resources should be free, it definitely needs to be managed especially when it is scarce. Controlled
water
supply will avoid people from misusing it, aslo
this
unused
water
can be supplied to countries with poverty and lack
water
reservoirs.
For example
, thousands of families face
water
shortage in northern
africa
Change the capitalization
Africa
show examples
due to the climatic conditions and millions of deaths due to
shortage
Correct article usage
a shortage
show examples
of basic human needs. Speaking about corruption, it is unavoidable in any country for that matter. The governing boards should improve their anti-corruption
beareu
Correct your spelling
bearer
bureau
for avoiding corruption scams by some authorities. In Conclusion, I would agree that important and basic resource
such
as
fresh
Correct your spelling
freshwater
show examples
water
should be controlled by the governments so that they can provide other poor nations as well as educate their own people to use it wisely.
Submitted by roshan.rebello22 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!
What to do next:
Look at other essays: