You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

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Good day, dear

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Adams My name is Alexey and I am a student of your part-time evening

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which you hold in the Richmond college by the program "SolidWorks, how to be proficient". My working schedule is suddenly was completely change and my boss wants to send me to a long business trip and as you understand that fact will not allow me to complete my study your

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, I would like to ask you how can we solve an issue with my payment for the

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? I will be absolutely happy if you give my refunds back, or I can consider an alternative variant,

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, you will keep my money but I will continue your

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pathway when I have come back. In any case, if my variants are not suited for you I will be glad to hear your proposal. I look forward to hearing from you soon as possible. Yours sincerely, Alexey.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

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Task Achievement: 6.0

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163 words

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