You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

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Good day, dear

Mr.

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Adams My name is Alexey and I am a student of your part-time evening

course

which you hold in the Richmond college by the program "SolidWorks, how to be proficient". My working schedule is suddenly was completely change and my boss wants to send me to a long business trip and as you understand that fact will not allow me to complete my study your

course

. According to

this

, I would like to ask you how can we solve an issue with my payment for the

course

? I will be absolutely happy if you give my refunds back, or I can consider an alternative variant,

for instance

, you will keep my money but I will continue your

course

for the

pathway when I have come back. In any case, if my variants are not suited for you I will be glad to hear your proposal. I look forward to hearing from you soon as possible. Yours sincerely, Alexey.

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