In many western countries there are an increasing number of couples choosing to have no children. What are the advantages and disadvantages to couples having no children?

It is a fact that nowadays, the proportion of not having a child is increasing in many western nations due to
couples
does not
want
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take any responsibility
of
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children
.
However
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there are many benefits and drawbacks of
this
phenomenon which will discuss in
further
paragraphs.
To begin
with,
care free
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life
and spend more time for own are the main aspects behind couple do not want
a
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children
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children
in their
life
.
This
is because
children
are
huge
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responsibility for each of them. They need special attention and care either of mother or father. Not spending free time for own after having
a
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children
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children
. To cite an example for
this
, many famous
actress
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do
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not having
a
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children
a child
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children
at
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in
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their 30’s. They only focus on their job or career.
Sometime
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they would be an obstacle
of
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to
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their career as well. To cite an example, many famous
actress
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actresses
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do
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does
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not having
a
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children
a child
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children
at
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in
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their 30’s. They only focus on their job or career. Another reason, Child care would be expensive things for
couple
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therefore
one of them put forward themselves to
fulfill
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fulfil
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needs
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of their family
through
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financially.
On the other hand
, those who do not have any kids suffer very
lovely
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when they become older.
Additionally
,
child
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the child
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is
medium
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of
an
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existence of
relationship
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the relationship
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. To explain
this
, whenever, the critical situation and clause happened between
couples
the
children
is the supportive and medium of your relationship
for instance
, in the public survey by the news channel, suggest that 60% of
couples
are having
baby
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a baby
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not think about divorce. In conclusion, I believe that it would be a worse thing if
couples
not having
a
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children
a child
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children
feeling alone and might a possibility to have
stressful
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life
.
Also
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it is a huge responsibility to have
baby
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a baby
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in
life
as
mean
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a mean
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of
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financially, emotionally as well as mentally
hence
couple would be ready for it.
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

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  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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