In many western countries there are an increasing number of couples choosing to have no children. What are the advantages and disadvantages to couples having no children?
It is a fact that nowadays, the proportion of not having a child is increasing in many western nations due to
couples
does not want
take any responsibility Add the particle
towant
of
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for
children
. However
there are many benefits and drawbacks of Add a comma
,However
this
phenomenon which will discuss in further
paragraphs.
To begin
with, care free
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carefree
life
and spend more time for own are the main aspects behind couple do not want a
Correct the article-noun agreement
children
a child
children
in their life
. This
is because children
are huge
responsibility for each of them. They need special attention and care either of mother or father. Not spending free time for own after having Add an article
a huge
a
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children
a child
children
. To cite an example for this
, many famous actress
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actresses
do
not having Change the verb form
does
a
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children
a child
children
at
their 30’s. They only focus on their job or career. Change preposition
in
Sometime
they would be an obstacle Correct your spelling
Sometimes
of
their career as well. To cite an example, many famous Change preposition
to
actress
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actresses
do
not having Change the verb form
does
a
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children
a child
children
at
their 30’s. They only focus on their job or career. Another reason, Child care would be expensive things for Change preposition
in
couple
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a couple
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, therefore,
therefore
one of them put forward themselves to fulfill
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fulfil
needs
of their family Correct article usage
the needs
through
financially.
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apply
On the other hand
, those who do not have any kids suffer very lovely
when they become older. Change the adjective
lovelily
Additionally
, child
is Add an article
the child
a child
medium
of Correct article usage
the medium
an
existence of Remove the article
apply
relationship
. To explain Add an article
the relationship
a relationship
this
, whenever, the critical situation and clause happened between couples
the children
is the supportive and medium of your relationship for instance
, in the public survey by the news channel, suggest that 60% of couples
are having baby
not think about divorce.
In conclusion, I believe that it would be a worse thing if Add an article
a baby
couples
not having a
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children
a child
children
feeling alone and might a possibility to have stressful
Add an article
a stressful
life
. Also
it is a huge responsibility to have Add a comma
,Also
baby
in Add an article
a baby
the baby
life
as mean
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a mean
the mean
of
financially, emotionally as well as mentally Change preposition
apply
hence
couple would be ready for it.Submitted by Shaunak Desai on
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...