Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organized and in the correct place. What is your opinion about this?
Some
people
argue that keeping the office and home well-organized is essential. Despite stuff that is
using on a regular basis and no need to distinguish in a special place
, I agree to a certain extent putting stuff in its right place
can bring us peace of mind along with accessibility to things whenever we desire.
To commence with, having a neat surrounding either in the office or building helps us to have a peaceful mind because we can access things easily. To illustrate, imagine a person looking for his/ her critical documents, for example
, a passport and ID card just an hour prior to a flight. Has he/
she put them in a particular place
, it would be possible to find it without any confusion and if not it can lead to missing a trip and resulting in the person feels distressed or anxious about that issue. Not to mention being tidy make people
more responsible as well. This
is because such
groups are aware of everything, for example
, they have a timetable putting their meetings in order to correct date. So, they can do their job properly which shows being well-organized is just more than important.
However
, there is not prerequisite to well-maintain everything. For example
, why a person who is such
a bookworm should take back his/
her book to the bookshelf every single moment. He/
she could keep it on the table in the room or kitchen until it will be finished.
In conclusion, I reaffirm my position that people
should have a habit in which being tidy and putting everything in their own place
. It is not only to be accessible easily but also
can make people
feeling convenient along with being more responsible.Submitted by roosta6787 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
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- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite