A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for his/her. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter Tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves Say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her Explain how to apply for the job

I am glad to hear that, eventually, you make a decision
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for a career in my country. It has been a long
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since we were in touch in Paris. To be honest, I have been waiting every single moment to see you again. Fortunately, I have already found two vacancies in my hometown, an “Entrepreneur Private Center” in which one of them
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appropriate for you because it seems
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with your skill.
Although
you will commence as a temporary executive employee who is responsible for product placement, I am sure you will receive a promotion in not too distant future. I imagine
besides
your brilliant academic resume along with having business-art experience at an international institute, your bilingual ability, getting on French and Persian, can raise your chance to be qualified. So, please submit your documents through a link attached to
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letter, meanwhile, send me a copy of your diploma because they would check all documents as long as they set an interview. Please do not hesitate if you have any
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. I hope to see you soon. Best regards, Anna
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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • reputation
  • industry
  • duties and responsibilities
  • typical day
  • skills and experiences
  • job requirements
  • company culture
  • personality
  • work ethic
  • application process
  • job listing
  • submit an application
  • documents required
  • tailored resume
  • cover letter
  • relevant experiences
  • reviewing documents
  • practicing for interviews
  • promptly
  • deadlines
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