Government should make laws about people’s nutrition and food choice. Other argue that is their choice. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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It is a heated debate argument that some
people
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think the
government
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should introduce laws for the nutrition and
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choice of
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.
On the contrary
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, other
people
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think everybody has the right to choose
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of their own choices. I agree with the former view and
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views in forthcoming paragraphs.
To begin
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with, many
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are really fond of eating
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. They like to eat different cuisines. Citizens have their own life to decide what to eat. Authorities cannot impose their diet chart on the folks. When
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sick
people
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eat their favourite
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they feel relaxed and happy.
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, In a survey, It was found that
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who eat
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their favourite
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are healthier and happy.
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, some personal have
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an allergy
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to some particular
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. So they cannot eat
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kind of
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. The
government
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does not know the need for
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's choice of
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.
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, others support the argument that
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should decide the
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with nutrients. Most
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people
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are suffering from heart disease, diabetes, cholesterol, obesity and so on. When the
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will decide
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for their citizens
then
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people
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will less suffer from diseases.
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, it has drawbacks too. Many
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who cannot eat some particular
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due to allergies will suffer. If they will not eat they will suffer from hunger. To conclude, In my opinion, eating
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is a hobby. Everybody
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has the freedom to eat.
People
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live once so they should eat what they like without bureaucracy intervention.
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