Should government fund public transport so as to be free for those who are using it? To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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are dependent on public transportation on daily basis. It is often argued that should
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service by the government be provided free of cost for its
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. I absolutely agree that providing
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facility free will greatly benefit both, the
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and the country.
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, the main advantages that will help the nation will be to encourage more
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to choose public
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rather than commuting with personal vehicles.
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will directly reduce
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air pollution which will improve the health of its citizens.
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,
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vehicles will ease the traffic congestion on the roads, allowing
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to reach their offices on time.
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, the consumption of fuels will gradually decrease if
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of
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opt for public
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, saving millions of dollars on fuel import.
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, individuals who cannot afford personal vehicles and are
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solely
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mode of
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will greatly benefit from
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.
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,
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will
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save on expenses
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as car maintenance and various road taxes. In conclusion,
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, there are some disadvantages
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as
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in the government income and increase in expenses to maintain the standards of public
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, Overall, the benefits to both, the individual and the country will outweigh all the cons.
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I totally agree with the idea of providing public transportation free of charge to the public.

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