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In many countries in the world, some people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this good for a country. Others think that the government should not allow salaries above a certain level. Discuss the both views and give your opinion.

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The table shows how much rain falling per month in Woodsville
city
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 and
Blacksboro
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city
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. Each
city
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 had a different
rainfall
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level
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 every month of the
year
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. Woodville had the amount average
rainfall
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level
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 of more than
Blacksboro
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 every month. There is the highest
level
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 of
rainfall
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 at the end of the
year
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 by average with 6
inches
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 in November and the following months with 5.5
inches
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.
Rainfall
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 decreases noticeably in the middle of the
year
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 until the least
level
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 in July, with just 0.75
inches
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. In
the
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Blacksboro
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Blacksburg
, February had the highest average
level
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 of
rainfall
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, with 4
inches
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 and the
second
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 most is in January, with 3
inches
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 of average
rainfall
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.
Then
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, the
rainfall
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 declines dramatically until July which is the minimum
level
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 of
rainfall
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 of the
year
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. Overall, the average monthly
rainfall
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 in Woodsville
city
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 is almost much more than
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Blacksboro
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in Blacksboro
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 all over the
year
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. Whereas, in both cities had the least
rainfall
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 in the middle of the
year
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