Government in many countries have recently introduce special taxes on food and beverages which is highly of sugar . some think that this taxes are good idea , but other are disagree on this view .
It appears that you have an unnecessary comma after the subordinating conjunction while. Consider removing the comma.
It appears that you are missing a comma after the introductory phrase In some Nation. Consider adding a comma.
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The noun phrase regulatory authority seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
The noun phrase healthy diet seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
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The word collage doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.
The word collage doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.
The noun phrase mind set seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
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The noun phrase negative impact seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
The noun phrase community seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
The adjective serious is modifying impact instead of a noun or pronoun. Use an adverb to modify a verb, adjective, or other adverb.
It appears that you are missing a comma after the introductory phrase in India. Consider adding a comma.
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The word is doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.
The noun phrase requirement seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
The spelling of fulfill is a non-British variant. For consistency, consider replacing it with the British English spelling.
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The noun phrase manufacturing company seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
The word loss doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.
The noun phrase private company seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
The noun phrase detrimental impact seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
The noun phrase country economy seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
The singular countable noun step follows the quantifier several, which requires a plural noun. Consider using a plural noun or a different quantifier.
The noun phrase individual seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
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It seems that article use may be incorrect here.
The noun phrase healthy society seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Examples make your writing easier to understand by illustrating points more effectively.
Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.
When giving examples it is best to put them after your main idea or topic sentence. They can be used in the middle of supporting sentences or they can be used to start a new sentence. There is no rule for where exactly to give examples in essays, logically they would come after your main idea/topic sentence or just after a supporting sentence.
Linking words for giving examples:
- for example
- for instance
- to illustrate this
- to give a clear example
- such as
- namely
- to illustrate
- take, for example