some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots. What is your opinion?

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Artificial
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is progressively captivating major sectors of
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industry by removing human interference. While it can't be denied that all menial
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will eventually be done by machines, it is unlikely for few
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which require human touch to be automated.
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essay will discuss why some
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will be carried out by humans.
Robots
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may eventually perform all activities which
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require complex skills and taking impromptu decisions. Organizations will always prefer to remove human interference as it reduces the probability of error.
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require
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investement
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investment
and
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, are less expensive than humans who in turn require training and per month wages.
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, a coffee
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machine is a wonderful invention and has replaced a human employee.
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, these automated machines work round the clock and require no holidays or sick leave. For these reasons,
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which can be performed by machine will be replaced.
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, there are some
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which
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require a 'human touch' and can't be replaced by
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. Industry domains
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as Medicine, Education and not to forget NGO's will always require human supervision.
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, babysitting and pet care requires an emotional aspect
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is not
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capability
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of Artificial
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.
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, vaccinations will always require human supervision as it varies with an individual.
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will never be able to achieve what
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mind is capable of. Undoubtedly,
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will acquire
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number of human
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. Redundant labour will eventually be substituted by
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;
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, skilled
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that require human attention will always exist. Ultimately, few
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will always be for human in the new era of Artificial
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • artificial intelligence (AI)
  • automation
  • robotics
  • futuristic developments
  • analyze data
  • analytical precision
  • human capabilities
  • emotional intelligence
  • human interaction
  • human oversight
  • strategic decision-making
  • nuances of human judgment
  • technological landscape
  • intrinsic human qualities
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