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“How to avoid stress from studying in an international program”

Studying an international
program
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 is sometimes difficult because of the course itself and the language. International
program
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. Students are not familiar with the language,
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, English. It is not our native language.
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 why many students who
study
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 international programs often find a way to avoid
stress
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. There are two main ways to avoid
stress
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 when studying an international
program
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.
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take regular breaks and schedule fun things to look forward to after class. The difficulty of studying in an international
program
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 is double compared to a regular
program
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. So, relaxation and break times usually help a lot.
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, go to the cinema, attend a concert
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 or even anything that you like doing in your spare time that will take your mind off the lecture for a while.
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, create a
study
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 plan. As studying an international
program
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 is more complicated than the regular one, it is better to plan your
study
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.
This
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 will help to remind you of what you need to
study
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, need to finish, and what you have already studied. You will be able to avoid
stress
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 because you already know what you have to do
next
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. In conclusion, there are two main ways to avoid
stress
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 from studying an international
program
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 by taking some rest, doing something fun, and creating a
study
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 plan.
Stress
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 can cause a lot of pain to a person, but we can find a way to avoid it. In the end, studying an international
program
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 is not easy but it does provide you
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with great
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 opportunities in the future workforce

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