Some people believe that after a child enters school their teachers will have more influence than their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some may argue that after kids start attending school, they tend to be more influenced by their instructors than by their parents. In fact,

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is a debatable statement. In order to construct our argumentation,

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we must recognise that young people will be influenced by different elements

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teachers, and parents. And because of

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we defend the position that distinct factors collaborate

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the development of a

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and more important social contact that a small kid will have is with their progenitors, even outer of the scholar space.

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, fathers and mothers play

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fundamental role in education, becoming

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of their

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's idols or heroes.

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, other colleagues, either the ones who live in the same neighbourhood, or who go to the same academic environment, tend to contribute with

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's personality.

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, even during the primary infant ages, it is known that part of our

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life is

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our peers in order to take part

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the group. We want to feel equal to those

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we admire.

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, coordinators

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be become

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relevant

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to children, but they are not the uniques.

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to them, there are books, other colleagues, actors and actress of

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the TV

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show. As a matter of fact, it is the combination of those aspects that will shape a human personality.

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, if a

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loves a particular cartoon, and feels completely identified with the story, she will probably dress

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and talk like her favourite character. The whole idea of being influenced by only

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person is absolutely impossible. To conclude,

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people may argue that after the beginning of the school life, a

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will acquire some traits from his teachers, it is believed that they

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just

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that will participate in the development along with parents, and other children. Because of that, all those participants must

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in an inspiring way, so that the small ones can pursue the best version of their own.