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Some people argue that technological inventions, such as mobile phones, are making people socially less interactive. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is a contentious debate whether advancement in technology is leading to poor socialization or not among
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. I firmly believe the usages of cell phones are causing
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 to waste their
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 and isolated life which are the key drawbacks of
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 and foremost, there is a lot of wastage of
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 using these gadgets. One can spend hours while surfing over various websites
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 as Youtube, Instagram, Facebook and other gaming application.
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, if
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 do not manage their
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 using cell phones for work or study, their efficiency might be affected. Due to which students can get lower grades in their studies, as well as the working
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, the working
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 may reduce their productivity.
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, in the University, survey it is shown that 80% of smartphone users invest 5 to 6 hours on average over the internet per day.
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, most of the
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 using mobiles phones are cut off themselves from their family members and friends. The reason behind the fact is that they are utilizing new communication applications like Skype, WhatsApp and electronic emails for sharing information
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 of a physical meeting. In
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 not only have less interaction with their colleagues and friends but
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 their relationships are disrupted.
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,
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 may experience a lot of health problems like stress, anxiety, depression and other bodily issues. To exemplify, had my friend, Travis, spent
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 with his parents, he would not have lived lonely in the hard times of his life without moral support from them. In conclusion, I am convinced that
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 these smart gadgets can connect us to the rest of the world, but taking one’s
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 and affecting their relationships, are actually hampering communication.
Submitted by Arun Saini on

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