If a product is good and meet customer needs,then people will buy it. So advertising it is unneccessary. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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In the modern world, there are plenty of products which are required on daily basis. Indeed, if anyone finds
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it useful or satisfy his or her needs
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they will buy that
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.In my opinion, of ,course promotion of the merchandise shows its qualities but it
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creates confusion in selection and over-expectation with the
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. The advertising industry not only creates
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expectation in the customer’s mind but
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confuse them for the right selection. Promotion of the
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generates false dreams and hopes in customers.
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, FairNlovely cream’s commercial shows, that it will change the skin colour in just seven days. Eventually, people buy
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cream with the expectation that they will be fair after applying
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promotes racism that black girl is not beautiful and fairness is the scale of beauty. Along with
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, as we can see so many advertisements from a different brand for
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single merchandise make user confused that which one is best to suits their requirement. That’s why it is believed that there should be a limit on displaying commercial. Certainly, the Media industry spending so much money to fool their customers as most of the products are not actually meant to work ,
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they are only for playing with customer’s emotions.
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– the Heena shampoo, in the advertisement shows that after applying
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shampoo a bald man gets the hair in just fifteen days.
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it's not possible if he applies it for fifteen years
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, commercials are
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important to some extent to convey the information of a new launch item in the market.So that consumers can weigh its pros and cons before making a decision to buy. In conclusion, the commercial of the
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should be controlled. As it is responsible for lots of false information, promotions should promise
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genuinity.
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