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Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets, and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example for your own knowledge or experience.

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Nowadays, there has been a lot of debates as to whether a
student
 should follow their favourite subject at university or they should study some significant promising
majors
such
 as engineering, medicine and information technology. I am personally in favour of the
first
 group due to the following reasons.
This
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students
 skills in different fields and putting some limitation in
kind
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the kind
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 of
majors
 that
students
 can study  leave a damaging influence on their career prospects. There are a number of reasons, which illustrate
Importance
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the Importance
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 of passion in
progress
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the progress
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 of individuals. It is an obvious fact that
students
 should be interested in what they are studying
otherwise
 they might not make much progress in their life.
Furthermore
, Passion plays a role in increasing
productivity
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the productivity
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 of
students
 in different terms.
For instance
, in designing a computer game there are several elements, which contribute to
improve
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 the quality of that game
such
 as attractive graphics sound and innovative ideas .
Students
 can be more successful in
this
 regard to follow their dreams.
On the other hand
, some people believe that universities should only offer subjects that will be useful in the future. There are a number of assertions that some
majors
such
 as engineering medicine or information technology are more beneficial for
the
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society and if
students
 take part in these courses they will have a brilliant future in terms of job opportunities and so on.
As a result
 of which, they can improve their quality of major can not only
affects
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student
's life but
also
 can increase
welfare
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the welfare
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 of the society in different aspects.
Furthermore
, a focus on technology in higher education could lead to
new
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a new
the new
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 invention, economic growth and greater future prosperity, but these limitations can discourage
students
 to follow their dreams and hinder
to show
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 their abilities in other
majors
 are. I strongly believe that
students
 should study in whatever that
are
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is
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 more attractive for them. in conclusion, It is true that promising
majors
 have a lot of benefits for a
student
 but University authorities should consider other elements for a
student
.  their life.These momentous
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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • convenience
  • time-saving
  • wide selection
  • competitive prices
  • discounts
  • accessibility
  • global marketplace
  • availability
  • fraud
  • scams
  • lack of
  • physical interaction
  • personal experience
  • impersonal
  • customer service
  • delays
  • delivery
  • return process
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