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Teleworking has been on the increase in recent years. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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Nowadays, many companies allow their workers to do
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 from
home
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. Due to the coronavirus pandemic, people get benefits from teleworking. In my opinion, its advantages outweigh its negative point.
This
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 essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of
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 from
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 in the forthcoming paragraphs.
To begin
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 with, there are some drawbacks to
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 modern trend.
Firstly
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, an employee will not interact with his peers. There will be a lack of communication skills and team spirit.
Secondly
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, when a person works from
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 there will be a
lot
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 distraction
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 as loud TV sound, children's noise, gossips and so on. He will not concentrate on his
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.
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, he will delay his tasks.
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, In my company, one of my colleagues did not
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 on
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 because he was
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 from
home
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. When
boss
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 asked him the reason for delaying
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 he replied a lot of distractions at
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.
On the other hand
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, there are numerous advantages of teleworking which outweigh the drawbacks.
First
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, the company saves a lot of money which they incurred on infrastructure. With
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money
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 they can hire more employees.
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, an employee can save
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 to commute and fuel. He can utilise his save
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 in
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. As results, the productivity of the company will increase.
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, an employee can
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in
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flexible hours and can give valuable
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 to his family.
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, In a survey, it was found that the people who
work
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 have
a better relationships
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a better relationship
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 with their family as compared to others. To conclude, In my opinion,
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 has some negative impacts
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 as distraction, less communication among employees. But it has more advantages which really benefit to employees and employers.
Submitted by Rajwinder Kaur on

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