You are getting married. Write a letter to an English speaking friend to invite him/her to wedding. In your letter

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ear Ahmad, Hope you are doing well. It's been a long since we met each other. I know you'll be glad to hear that I'm getting married next week and want to invite you to attend my wedding ceremony. I have no doubt in my mind that it will be an amazing experience for you and will provide you with the opportunity to explore our culture and heritage. You will enjoy the delicious band

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fantastic hospitality. You will never be disappointed if you decide to join us.

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you may have attended Asian weddings in the UK. I’m sure that attending a wedding in Pakistan will be a unique experience. I hope you will join us soon after receiving

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letter. Please inform me about your arrival schedule so that I can manage my availability to receive you as a special guest. Waiting for you with a core of my heart, hope you never let me down. Yours Sincerely, Kunwar

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Spelling/Typo

Ensure to double-check for minor typographical errors such as 'band treditional foods' which was likely meant to be 'and traditional foods'. Although they are minor, polishing these will perfect your letter.

Coherence

Enhance the coherence of the letter by adding transitions or connectors between ideas for smoother flow. This will elevate the logical progression of the text.

Task Achievement

Consider providing more personal touches or specific details about the wedding (e.g., the date, the venue) to make your friend feel even more involved and special.

Tone

You've done an excellent job setting a warm and inviting tone, making it clear how much the recipient's presence would mean to you.

Task Achievement

Your letter effectively conveys the importance of the event and gracefully extends an invitation, accomplishing the main goals of the task.

Structure

The organization of your letter, with a clear introduction, details about the wedding, and a heartfelt closing, showcases good logical structure.

The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

164 words

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The Greeting

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