Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To extent what do you agree or disagree with this view?

Arts

are vital in many

nations

. The ministry of art has invested thousands

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artwork.

However

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some individuals opine that it should be aimed

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elsewhere. I wholeheartedly disagree with

this

and believe that it would be worthy for

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in

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To begin

with,

arts

are considered

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a national priority.

Arts

are significant in many

nations

and the authority creates and supports institutions that encouraging artworks.

For example

, many

nations

have galleries, shows, exhibitions and museums all over the world to illustrate antique

arts

. The galleries accessed free of cost by those who have been involved.

Also

, the responsibility of

nations

to maintain or repairs it wisely.

Consequently

,

this

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of pride among the people.

For instance

, The united kingdom has

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antique museum that reveals various culture around the world, it could be a pride moment

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the

britishers

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when they have added a famous painter painting

in

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their museum.

Moreover

, the government is making attempt to retain culture, in the form of crafts, shows, cinemas, and exhibitions. People of every age are fond of cinemas, It is deemed beneficial and

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culture, there seems to be a movie industry. Crafts including sculpture, terracotta house, print skill, crystal work, and glass paintings. The higher authority of

arts

helps many individuals to well‐being supports who focus their career mostly on crafts. In conclusion, we can say that it is not a waste of money, in spite of artwork plays a key role to many

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their careers.

Furthermore

, it would be overlooked by the government to well supportive.