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Some people think that a huge amount of time and money spent on the protection of wild animals and that this money could be better spent on the human population to what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion

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Some layman
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 that an immense amount of time and money which is utilised for the conservation of fauna rather than
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 it the more beneficial to spend on the development of people. I partially agree with the above statement because both of them are equally contributing to the sustainable development of the country. On the one hand, there are still a large number of underdeveloped countries facing issues related to poverty and unemployment.To combat
such
 problems government ought to take certain steps and spend some part of the money to provide at least basic amenities in the rural area especially.
Furthermore
, poor ,people dead rates are escalating more because of starving and poor medical facilities,
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major financial support is required to be taken by an adequate administration, in ,addition due to the shortage of jobs qualified adolescence are losing their lives either by doing suicide or consuming drugs.
Therefore
 it is becoming essential for the administration to provide jobs and poverty to invest in humankind.
On the other hand
, researchers have concluded that no human will able to live more than three years without animals support.
Moreover
, a lot of basic needs can only be fulfilled through animals.To elaborate ,dairy products which are crucial for the community came from cows,
secondly
 ,Honey which is used for medicinal purpose
also
 be collected from bees,
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, from the above illustrations it is apparent that lawmakers should defence animals either by investing in forest lands or by making awareness in people through various campaigns . In the final ,comment it is imperative to emphasize both habitations equally because indirectly they both are reliant on each other to fulfil their needs.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • ecosystem stability
  • pollination
  • water purification
  • climate regulation
  • eco-tourism
  • scientific research
  • moral and ethical responsibility
  • deforestation
  • pollution
  • financial cost
  • social issues
  • healthcare
  • education
  • fund allocation
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