Some people think that the fittest and strongest individuals of the team can achieve success in sports, while others believe that success depends on mental attitude. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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physical strength

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. Others think

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that success depends on a mental

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views in forthcoming paragraphs and I personally believe that a mental

attitude

is most important to achieve triumph.

To begin

with, Some believe that one can win a game by his physical strength. They take the fittest

body

key to success.

For instance

, In wrestling, If a

player

is physically strong he can win the medals. A person who is strong can overcome all the problems.

On the other hand

, others

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I included, believe that mental

attitude

is most important to earn

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more medals. A person with a strong

body

and without a mental

attitude

cannot do anything in the playground. Mind training and mental

attitude

are ahead to achieve the goal.

For instance

last

week, I watched an interview with badminton

player

Sania Nehwal. In which she

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mentioned that she plays with a mental

attitude

. One should set his mind to achieve the desired goal. It's all about the strategy which is already planning in mind how to play against a particular

player

To conclude

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essay discussed both views

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why some people believe that

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body

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the contrary,

others

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and I believe that mental

attitude

is everything to achieve success in

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life. The fittest

body

without strategy is nothing. A

player

should have proper planning to win.

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