Some people think that the fittest and strongest individuals of the team can achieve success in sports, while others believe that success depends on mental attitude. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Many people believe that the successful career of
the
Correct article usage
a
sportsmen
Fix the agreement mistake
sportsman
is depended
on Wrong verb form
depends
the
physical strength Correct article usage
apply
such
as muscles, body
. Others think Correct word choice
and body
that
that success depends on a mental Correct word choice
apply
attitude
. This
essay will discuss both the
views in forthcoming paragraphs and I personally believe that a mental Correct article usage
apply
attitude
is most important to achieve triumph.
To begin
with, Some believe that one can win a game by his physical strength. They take the fittest body
key to success. For instance
, In wrestling, If a player
is physically strong he can win the medals. A person who is strong can overcome all the problems.
On the other hand
, others and
I included, believe that mental Correct word choice
apply
attitude
is most important to earn the
more medals. A person with a strong Correct article usage
apply
body
and without a mental attitude
cannot do anything in the playground. Mind training and mental attitude
are ahead to achieve the goal. For instance
, last
week, I watched an interview with badminton player
Sania Nehwal. In which she particular
mentioned that she plays with a mental Change the word
particularly
attitude
. One should set his mind to achieve the desired goal. It's all about the strategy which is already planning in mind how to play against a particular player
.
To conclude
, this
essay discussed both views that
why some people believe that Change preposition
on
strongest
Correct word choice
a strong
body
is necessary and on
the contrary, Change preposition
apply
others
and I believe that mental Correct word choice
while others
attitude
is everything to achieve success in the
life. The fittest Correct article usage
apply
body
without strategy is nothing. A player
should have proper planning to win.Submitted by Rajwinder Kaur on
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