Some people think that the fittest and strongest individuals of the team can achieve success in sports, while others believe that success depends on mental attitude. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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sportsmen

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is depended

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physical strength

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as muscles,

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. Others think

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that success depends on a mental

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essay will discuss both

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views in forthcoming paragraphs and I personally believe that a mental

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is most important to achieve triumph.

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with, Some believe that one can win a game by his physical strength. They take the fittest

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key to success.

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, In wrestling, If a

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is physically strong he can win the medals. A person who is strong can overcome all the problems.

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, others

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I included, believe that mental

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is most important to earn

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more medals. A person with a strong

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and without a mental

attitude

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cannot do anything in the playground. Mind training and mental

attitude

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are ahead to achieve the goal.

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week, I watched an interview with badminton

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Sania Nehwal. In which she

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mentioned that she plays with a mental

attitude

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. One should set his mind to achieve the desired goal. It's all about the strategy which is already planning in mind how to play against a particular

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this

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essay discussed both views

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why some people believe that

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body

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is necessary and

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the contrary,

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and I believe that mental

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is everything to achieve success in

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life. The fittest

body

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without strategy is nothing. A

player

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should have proper planning to win.

Rajwinder KaurSat May 29 2021

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

254 words

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