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Government should spend more money on education than on recreation and sports. Agree or disagree?

#government #money #education #recreation #sports
Some believe that public investment should prioritise academic
life
 over
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extracurricular
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extra curricular
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extracurricular
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 activities.
As a result
,
government
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the government
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 would spend more money on the
first
.
However
, I completely disagree
this
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 statement. In my opinion, both are equally important, either because they contribute
with
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 the improvement of mental and physical
health
 or with the development of social
habilities
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abilities
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.
Firstly
, dedicating time to recreation activities is relevant for
health
. Regarding mental
health
, the frequent practice of exercises reduces cortisol levels in the organism,
thus
 the individual will have a less stressful
life
.
Moreover
, in terms of
body
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, it will help to build strength, and strongness, which are core factors to the
health
 in the long term. In order to provide one example, considering
life
 expectancy, people do not only want to live more, they want to live better as well. So, learning since the beginning to maintain those habits will provide a more prolonged existence.
Secondly
, putting stress on leisure time assists in the development of social
habilities
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. Thereby, some needed skills will be fostered,
such
 as
sense
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a sense
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 of collectivity, discipline, leadership, and team spirit.
Furthermore
, it is known the importance of all these traits when it comes to
live
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 in
community
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the community
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. Later in the future, these skills will be considered indispensable whether in a company where the person will work or in his community
life
,
for instance
. If existing in society is an estimated characteristic to the success of
human
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 species, economic investments should be given to it,
as a result
. To summarise, governments must balance their investments between education and recreation. One because it is a strategy to fight against disorders and diseases.
Second
 due to social reasons since it will improve some social behaviours indispensables to build up a sense of belonging. Those arguments reveal why public investments should prioritise both, education and
extra academic
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 activities.
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