Some people prefer to help or support directly in the local community for people who need it; however, others prefer to give money to the national or private charities. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.
Nowadays some individuals rather support or
assistance
those in need in the regional community than giving money to national or private charities. While others prefer to do it vice versa. In my opinion, helping a local community to aid local inhabitants who need it, is improves the live quality of a particular region, whereas national or private charities pursue national or global supporting projects.
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assist
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, promoting a local aid organisation can be done by spending earnings and/or providing personal support on-site. If someone is busy but has plenty of financial resources and still wants to improve the regional standard of living, they can donate cash. Linking Words
This
revenue could be used for building accommodations for Linking Words
homeless
population, buying food and clothes or constructing educational facilities. Add an article
the homeless
However
, participants who want personally assists have the possibility, Linking Words
for instance
, to distribute food or clothes to the vulnerable.
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On the other hand
, national or private charities, Linking Words
such
as UNICEF, Médecins Sans Frontiers or Greenpeace, try to combat global suffering, Linking Words
for
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instance
famine, epidemics, violence against children or women, child labour, environmental protection, animal welfare etc. Donating money to those institutions reduce global suffering and help people around the world. Even if many individuals only make a small donation, a lot of earnings can be raised to improve living conditions worldwide.
In conclusion, assisting a local community aims to help vulnerable local human beings, whether personally or by donating money, while giving it to a national or private charity is used to combat and even reduce global suffering.Add the comma(s)
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite