Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is clear that
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in foreign countries face
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a
language
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their private life. From my point of view, an individual coming from another
country
should respect the
country
’s national culture and know at least easy conversation to deal with citizens.
To begin
with,
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a migrant
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who is not able to understand foreigner’s native
language
can face with a social problem. Not knowing a foreign
language
, while living in a specific
country
might influence the
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behaviour
of others.
People
can misunderstand,
for example
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or
language
of newcomers and it can cause serious problems,
such
as hatred and disrespect. In my consideration, to move to the other nation, migrants at least try to learn simple
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gestures
or polite dialogues to get along well with them.
Otherwise
, a person who doesn’t know how to behave in a particular culture might offend locals around him. The
second
practical problem might be finding a job. An individual who works in a foreign
country
may not be appropriate for
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he serves.
For instance
, if a person works in a restaurant , the
people
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were born in that
country
might not respect and not like the behaviour of a person who works in that place, it may be because
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the cultures are different. The better
people
know a foreign
language
the better they deal with citizens. To sum up, it can be said that there are a lot of
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misconceptions
which
people
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a foreign
country
, and from my personal experience
people
should educate themselves in order to know how to behave in different situations with different cultures.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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