Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is clear that
expats
in foreign countries face Correct your spelling
ex-pats
with
a Change preposition
apply
language
barrier which
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that
affect
their private life. From my point of view, an individual coming from another Change the verb form
affects
country
should respect the country
’s national culture and know at least easy conversation to deal with citizens.
To begin
with, migrant
who is not able to understand foreigner’s native Add an article
a migrant
the migrant
language
can face with a social problem. Not knowing a foreign language
, while living in a specific country
might influence the behevior
of others. Correct your spelling
behaviour
People
can misunderstand, for example
, the behavior
or Change the spelling
behaviour
language
of newcomers and it can cause serious problems, such
as hatred and disrespect. In my consideration, to move to the other nation, migrants at least try to learn simple jestures
or polite dialogues to get along well with them. Correct your spelling
gestures
Otherwise
, a person who doesn’t know how to behave in a particular culture might offend locals around him.
The second
practical problem might be finding a job. An individual who works in a foreign country
may not be appropriate for people
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the people
who
he serves. Change the pronoun
whom
For instance
, if a person works in a restaurant , the people
who live in a country
and they
were born in that Correct pronoun usage
apply
country
might not respect and not like the behaviour of a person who works in that place, it may be because,
the cultures are different. The better Remove the comma
apply
people
know a foreign language
the better they deal with citizens.
To sum up, it can be said that there are a lot of misconseptions
which Correct your spelling
misconceptions
people
have when they come in
a foreign Change preposition
to
country
, and from my personal experience people
should educate themselves in order to know how to behave in different situations with different cultures.Submitted by Flora on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
