Advertising campaigns on TV that are targeted at children should be banned. To what extent to you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Media has been increasingly playing a major role in
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everyone's
everyones
life.Some people think that few advertisements found to be selling for Change to a genitive case
everyone's
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children
children's
childrens
need to be restricted while others consider it hardly matters and impacts any Correct your spelling
children
kids
.
To begin
with, many companies
these days spend a huge sum of money in
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on
ads
, even more than the investment done for manufacturing their product
.The many reason
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reasons
this
is the increasing competition among the sellers.Companies
are trying to make the best use of media , like newspaper, pamplets
, tv Correct your spelling
pamphlets
ads
, stalls etc to ensure their product
reaches to
end customers visibility.One Fix the infinitive
apply
such
product
that has lately gained attention is items more related to kids
, namely chocolates , toys, cream, powders and food items such
as power drinks, cereals.The sellers make fantasy ads
for their products making them real and amuse the Correct your spelling
children
childrens
and even parents to buy and use the Correct your spelling
children
product
.But in reality its
hardly even 1 % true.Correct your spelling
it's
For Example
,Ads
related to drinks like horlicks
or complain state that they are high in Change the capitalization
Horlicks
protien
and can build ur height to 6 feet.But Correct your spelling
protein
thats
hardly true, Correct your spelling
that's
as
few of my cousins personally tried and felt Correct your spelling
a
this
a failure even it didnt
help build their immunity.
Another exampleCorrect your spelling
didn't
,
is the campaigns on cereals for Remove the comma
apply
kids
says
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say
its
a huge substitute for fruits and vegetables.Many Replace the word
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it is
kids
get falsified with this
information and upon many years of depending on these foods fail to get physically fit.Not only that they lose their physical strength but also
lose the
confidence in themselves and eventually lose hope in their life.Though parents at one hand can explain to their Correct article usage
apply
kids
saying these are just for money making
which these Add a hyphen
money-making
companies
try to , but
its really hard for all children to accept it.Even Remove the conjunction
apply
more
if the repeated advertisements that these Add a comma
,more
companies
make that sometimes even a well knowledged
adult fails at one point and accepts to buy and try.
In conclusion,advertisements Add a hyphen
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to products for Correct your spelling
related
kids
needs to be strictly banned which has little truth as its seriously affects the children and in turn the future generation and country growth.Submitted by sgsudharsun on
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