You have a Facebook friend living in another country and s/he is curious to learn about a major news item in your country. Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter describe a news story in your country explain why people are interested in it say how the story personally relates to you

Hello Mark, I hope you are enjoying the summer vacation. I am writing
this
to let you know more details on the
Submarine
museum
that we talked about
last
week. The
Submarine
museum
was started
couple
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of months ago on the seashore in my town which grabbed the whole country's attention for weeks. All most from each corner of my country
is
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started coming to my town to visit the newly started
museum
which is totally unlike other museums. As the
museum
is all about the inside
submarine
,
Visiters
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are really excited to see it as we generally do not get
this
kind of opportunity and
moreover
, there is no
such
second
museum
in our country. The interesting part is, we are allowed to go inside and see different parts of the
submarine
and understand how exactly it works. To add, as long as we are inside the
museum
, we feel like we come for a science tour. My totally family visited
this
couple of days back and I can not really
forgot
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the time we spent visiting the
submarine
museum
. Let me know in advance when you come here so that we both can plan to go there. See you soon! Best Wishes, Hari
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