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Some people do not mind spending their leisure time with their colleagues ‎while some prefer to keep their private life separate from their work life. ‎Discuss both views, and give your opinion.‎

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Leisure
time
 is an essential requirement for every
people
 in the world. In our ‎modern day-to-day life, spending
leisure
time
 has become the primary ‎entertainment medium for
people
 worldwide.
However
, who should we spend our ‎
leisure
 period with requires a discussion. ‎ We must acknowledge that we spend most of our
time
 at the workplace.
People
 ‎we engage in our day-to-day life are the
people
 from those
workplaces
 only. So, it ‎will make it very much easier to make a friendship with the
people
 at work. As all ‎the earlier friends from schools or universities are scattered in different ‎geolocations, the only viable option is to spend
leisure
time
 with co-workers cum ‎friend nowadays. ‎
Nevertheless
, most of the
time
, co-workers have their agenda on how to behave. ‎Type of verbal
behavior
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 is not healthy for any relationship. We would like to free ‎ourselves from all the boundaries provided in our
workplaces
 in our
leisure
 ‎period. So, verbal
behavior
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 will not help us to enjoy. ‎
Also
, we spend most of the weekdays in the
workplaces
. Sometimes we stay far ‎away from families. Sometimes our work is so hectic that it becomes tough to ‎maintain work and private life balance. So, in our
leisure
 period, we should spend ‎more
time
 with our families than
friends
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 from the
workplaces
. ‎ In conclusion,
although
 friendship is a mandatory requirement for human beings, ‎friends from
workplaces
 should be less preferred over family members. Vacations ‎should be dedicated to family members only.
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