Some people think that social networking sites have a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Even though social networking sites have brought many benefits to humans, it is

also

undeniable that they

also

create plenty of drawbacks for personal and the whole society. I mostly agree with the above statement since social-media sites make individuals addicted;

however

, social members remarkably benefit from

this

innovative sector.

To begin

with, social-media addiction has severe implications for the personal level since

people

spend

excessive

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amount of time just

to look

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looking

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at these websites, and

this

habit distracts us from concentrating on our daily tasks.

For instance

, many of us spend half of

their

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our

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day

to chat

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chatting

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with

people

on Messengers, watch Tik Tok videos for entertaining,

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or

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of

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or

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simply scroll

al

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all

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the photos on Instagram. A

first

, these fascinating contents and videos make us feel relaxed and happy;

however

, if we build up

this

habit, we will slowly feel depressed because we gradually withdraw ourselves from

the

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real-world interactions and replace them with virtual platforms.

On the other hand

, using social tools online could help

people

expand their network by connecting with a larger number of

people

. There is a wide range of online websites that provides us with platforms to express

themselves

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by,

for example

, posting texts, photos, and videos. By sharing

such

kind of information,

people

could quickly attract viewers that have common interest and establish a relationship.

In addition

, social media platforms are extremely useful for being in contact with several friends simultaneously, especially in times of corona pandemic. Before the internet era, it was tremendously difficult for anyone to approach

such

numbers of

people

in real life and all above, to stay in contact with them. In conclusion, using social-media sites actively helps

people

creating more connections to the outer world,

nevertheless

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it

also

causes an addition in numerous users and

distract

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distracts

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them from the real world.