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Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course

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Dear Sir, I am writing
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 letter in reference to the advertisement on the notice board outside the library for an
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advance
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computer
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course
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 at university. I am currently studying
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history at Colorado University. From
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age
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 I was very keen
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 learning the
computer
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. So, in 12th
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 I started learning a
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 by myself visiting cybercafé and sometimes at my friend place. I got the knowledge of all the basics skills required to operate a
computer
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 like Ms excel, PPt and some basics coding. But as I learned myself so I don’t have any certificate for a
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. I want to request, if possible, I can enrol for the
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 computing
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 at university. I am ready to give an entrance test
if
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 required to test my knowledge about the elementary or if any other possible way I can get
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 seat in the
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course
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. I am very keen on learning the
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 and
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addition
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 I am sincere, punctual and dedicate toward it. Let me know if you
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 any
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 information for the enrolment. I look forward to
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 from you. Yours faithfully, Guru Singh
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