Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor. What are some of the reasons for world poverty? How can the poor be helped? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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, it is irrefutable that each nation has poor folks and has distinct methods of dealing with

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. Unemployment and illiteracy are two prime reasons for

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and employment can resolve

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issue.

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essay will discuss the aforementioned points in upcoming paragraphs with examples. To commence with, there are a plethora of causes for

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poverty

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, but the lack of proper

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and insufficient job

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, in many countries, children do not get even primary

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the unavailbility

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of schools in multiple remote locations.

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, a survey recently conducted by UNICEF has revealed that 30% of the population of developing nations did not complete their secondary

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decade because of

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, many countries are struggling to produce ample jobs for their citizens.

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, the scarcity of work options and

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to complete secondary

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are key factors for

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poverty

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, the government of every nation must ensure to provide

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people in some countries do not want to send their children to schools, the authorities can introduce Mid-day Meal to lure them.

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, post introduction of

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Meal scheme in India in 2010, there was a

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increase in the number of students who did the primary and secondary schooling.

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, the governments should create more jobs.

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, the authorities can help in reducing

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unemplyment

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unemployment

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essay discussed, the illiteracy and unemployment are two main reasons for

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poverty

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. The government can help by starting new schemes

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as Mid-Day Meal to attract more children in schools and generate more job opportunities for their citizens.

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Topic Vocabulary:

income inequality
economic policies
poverty cycle
job opportunities
government intervention
small businesses
corruption
poverty alleviation
conflict and instability
international aid
peacekeeping efforts
healthcare access

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Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor. What are some of the reasons for world poverty? How can the poor be helped? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Your opinion

In some culture children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

We cannot help everyone in the world that needs help, so we should only be concerned with our own communities and countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people believe that children should be taught to be competitive in school, while others think that they should be taught to cooperate with others. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people think that local authorities should control where building can be constructed. Others think that everyone should be free to build where they like without permission. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.