The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019.

The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019.
The bar chart provides information about how many tonnes of pineapples were sold to foreign countries by leading exporters in
this
field in 2009 and 2019,
while
the pie chart depicts
proportions
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the proportions
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of different types of
costs
that are included in the pineapple product for the final customer.
Overall
, in terms of pineapple
exporters
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there was a noticeable switch in 2019 when
Country
A became a leader and replaced
Country
B
. Considering the
costs
to the consumers, distribution, taxes, and profit margin account for 69% of the price of the final pineapple product. In 2009
Country
A sold approximately 1 ton of pineapples,
while
Country
B
achieved more than four-fold more volume of export than
Country
B
. Ten years later
Country
A rose significantly by ten times and became the major exporter
between
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among
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the three leading countries. At the same time
Country
C during the ten-year period grew up slightly, and
Country
B
witnessed a dramatic fall in 2019 by almost three times. The cost breakdown for the consumer in 2019 is mainly affected by distribution and retail
costs
,
that
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which
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account for 35%,
while
taxes and profit margin have comparable figures of 16% and 18%, respectively.
Costs
on import consist of import licences and international transportation
costs
are 10% and 12%, respectively,
others
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other
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costs
cumulatively are less than 10%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words costs, country, b with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • exports
  • dominant
  • emerging trends
  • production costs
  • transportation
  • retailer markup
  • global trade dynamics
  • sustainability
  • market demand
  • economic factors
  • export volumes
  • logistic costs
  • retail price
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