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Band 7.5

A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: explain what you are currently doing and describe your suitability for this area of work say when you can attend an interview

Dear hiring manager, I hope
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 letter finds you well in the best spirits. My name is Kanyaporn Sudsaneh. I am writing to apply for the waiter position advertised in your local newspaper yesterday. I am very interested in
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 opportunity and would like to be considered as a candidate. I am currently working at the front of house at the ABC restaurant .
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,I graduated in Hospitality Management. I believe I am well-suited for
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 role because I have experienced than 3 years about hospitality at small restaurants through fusion restaurants , including taking online orders,receiving phone calls from customers and providing high-quality service in busy restaurant environments.
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,I hold a First-Aid certificate and a Food Safety certificate , which I understand are important for
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 job. I appreciate your time to review
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 letter , and I will be available for a physical or on-call interview between 2 pm -5 pm from Monday to Friday. If you need more information, please do not hesitate to contact me. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Faithfully Kanyaporn Sudsaneh

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structure
Make the letter flow in clear steps. Use one idea per paragraph. Start with your aim, then fit for the job, then when you can have an interview. Use short sentences and clear links.
grammar
Fix small grammar and spelling. Check spaces and commas. Use plain words.
content
Tie the points to the job ad. Say why you want this job and what you can give to the restaurant.
tone and convenience
Be clear about when you can come for an interview. Offer a time range and a preferred day if needed.
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You show you have work in front of house and care for guests.
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You mention safety facts like First-Aid and Food Safety, which fit the job.
tone
You ask for an interview and give times to meet.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • applying
  • suitable
  • hospitality
  • customer service
  • experience
  • enthusiasm
  • availability
  • communication skills
  • attention to detail
  • teamwork
  • food safety
  • certification
  • interview
  • flexibility
  • ambiance
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