In the past, shopping was a routine domestic task. Many people nowadays regard it as a hobby. To what extent do you think this is a positive trend?

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Shopping used to be regarded as a chore that should be done to acquire necessary
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, with the development of consumer society, a lot of people started regarding it as fun and
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relaxing activity, more a hobby than a routine task. To my mind,
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trend is neither healthy nor useful as it has negative consequences both for buyers and for the world around them.
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shopping requires our free time and money. Treating shopping as
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leisure is a part of consumer culture
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encourages overspending. The easiest way to get
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that you want as soon as possible is by using credit cards. The idea of buying now and paying later is incredibly tempting. But as
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people may end up in debt.
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, money spent on unnecessary
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could have been spent on something more useful but not material like sports club membership. What is more with shopping as a trend we forget that it is possible to have fun for free, playing board games or gardening etc.
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, we trade quality pastime for consumerism. Another reason for my negative attitude to shopping as a hobby is that it contributes to environmental pollution. Nowadays, most purchases are made not out of necessity but rather out of boredom.
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, people often buy
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they do not need. In the end, most of these possessions will be sent to a landfill adding up to enormous piles of waste.
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the sheer place those objects take up some of them may be dangerous,
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, some mobile phone parts contain hazardous metals
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as lead.
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, many of the
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we buy come with packaging which is made of plastic or similar poorly degradable materials. Most of the discarded plastic ends up in
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or some water body. To conclude, spending free time shopping is not a positive trend. It pollutes the environment with tons of
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and packaging.
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, it has a negative effect on our way of life particularly on how we manage our finances and time.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumerism
  • retail therapy
  • materialism
  • disposable income
  • economic growth
  • financial instability
  • environmental impact
  • social interaction
  • community building
  • emotional satisfaction
  • advertising influence
  • shopping habits
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