Most people have forgotten the meaning behind traditional or religious festivals; during festival periods, people nowadays only want to enjoy themselves. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Festivals are an integral part of our society and
culture
. Many people
even do not remember the real meaning of their ancestral culture
. In fact, during these ,occasions they enjoy their life alone. I completely agree with this
statement. This
essay will discuss that people
are busy in earning their livelihood and they have limited numbers of holidays as the main reasons for this
.
Everyone is busy in their career and money-making process. because of this
,reason people
forgot their traditional value and culture
that their ancestors have been carrying for long period. For example
, residents of Asian countries only celebrate western festivals like Christmas. Due to ,this
their coming generation will be deprived of real traditions, which was originated a long time
ago for certain reasons. In fact, some festivals are made to cope with a particular type of problem.
Most of the people
enjoy festival time
alone because they got leave from their company and they want to spend this
time
for their personal use rather than spending time
with their family. For instance
, many youngsters go-to holiday trip to foreign countries instead
of spending time
with their family members. Consequently
, these young people
do not know the real meaning of traditional cultures.
In conclusion, I totally agree with the statement that people
have forgotten the real reason for festivity, and they are busy in their career and waste their valuable time
arranging a trip with their colleagues and peers. I would suggest, they should know their culture
well and carry it forward to the next
generation.Submitted by suniliftm1982 on
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