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5. Some people believe schoolchildren should help to create rules in their schools. Others say teachers alone should decide what the rules are. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

#people #schoolchildren #rules #schools #teachers
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In today's world of
globalisation
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 the issue regarding creating
rules
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 in
education
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 system has become a major cause of concern.
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 many people think that
school
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 toddlers should make a list of
rules
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 by themselves in
school
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. While others tend to claim that including me the
teachers
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 play a key role to determine the
rules
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 criteria and see that
children
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 should implement
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. In
this
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 attributes of both
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 of views with relevant examples to strengthen my opinion.
Firstly
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,
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children
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children
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 are not well known about the
rules
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 and regulations of
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school
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the school
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 system and to be
frank
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 they are not mature enough to create
rules
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 and follow on it strictly as they take it granted some times to follow those
rules
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 in
school
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 because those were created by their own and feel irresponsible as they were not under elder's supervision.
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, In most of the
schools
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school's
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 classroom walls are empty without any useful project charts displayed because
student's
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students
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 are not held responsible to do subject projects and create awareness of subject knowledge.
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, student's cannot follow the
rules
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.
On the other hand
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, others argue that
teachers
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 should create
the
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 set of
rules
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 in schools and I totally agree
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 that. Because
teachers
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 are aware
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 the
school
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 principles and
also
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 the mindset of
children
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's.
Teachers
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 have all the rights to make student's act on those principles very strictly.
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, In my
childhood
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 our teacher created the rule to collect all the
peers
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peer's
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 homework without missing anyone and should be kept on
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 table. So, due to
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rule
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 there will be discipline maintained in
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the classroom
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 without any disturbance of
children
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's roaming all over the class.
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,
Teachers
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 can maintain
rules
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 in
school
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 in a
magnificient
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magnificent
 manner. In conclusion, everyone has their own perspectives with merits and demerits. Personally, I think that
rules
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 should only create by
teachers
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 and make
children
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 follow
very
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them very
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 well
on
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it.
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