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5. Some people believe schoolchildren should help to create rules in their schools. Others say teachers alone should decide what the rules are. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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In today's world of
globalisation
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 the issue regarding creating
rules
 in
education
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 system has become a major cause of concern.
Although
 many people think that
school
 toddlers should make a list of
rules
 by themselves in
school
. While others tend to claim that including me the
teachers
 play a key role to determine the
rules
 criteria and see that
children
 should implement
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. In
this
 essay, I will
elaborating
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 attributes of both
point
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 of views with relevant examples to strengthen my opinion.
Firstly
,
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children
childrens
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children
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 are not well known about the
rules
 and regulations of
school
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the school
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 system and to be
frank
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 they are not mature enough to create
rules
 and follow on it strictly as they take it granted some times to follow those
rules
 in
school
 because those were created by their own and feel irresponsible as they were not under elder's supervision.
For example
, In most of the
schools
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school's
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 classroom walls are empty without any useful project charts displayed because
student's
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students
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 are not held responsible to do subject projects and create awareness of subject knowledge.
Hence
, student's cannot follow the
rules
.
On the other hand
, others argue that
teachers
 should create
the
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 set of
rules
 in schools and I totally agree
on
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 that. Because
teachers
 are aware
with
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 the
school
 principles and
also
 the mindset of
children
's.
Teachers
 have all the rights to make student's act on those principles very strictly.
For instance
, In my
childhood
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 our teacher created the rule to collect all the
peers
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peer's
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 homework without missing anyone and should be kept on
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 table. So, due to
this
rule
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 there will be discipline maintained in
classroom
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the classroom
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 without any disturbance of
children
's roaming all over the class.
Thus
,
Teachers
 can maintain
rules
 in
school
 in a
magnificient
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magnificent
 manner. In conclusion, everyone has their own perspectives with merits and demerits. Personally, I think that
rules
 should only create by
teachers
 and make
children
 follow
very
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 well
on
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it.
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