5. Some people believe schoolchildren should help to create rules in their schools. Others say teachers alone should decide what the rules are. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In today's world of
globalisation
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the issue regarding creating
rules
in
education
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system has become a major cause of concern.
Although
many people think that
school
toddlers should make a list of
rules
by themselves in
school
. While others tend to claim that including me the
teachers
play a key role to determine the
rules
criteria and see that
children
should implement
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attributes of both
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of views with relevant examples to strengthen my opinion.
Firstly
,
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children
childrens
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are not well known about the
rules
and regulations of
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system and to be
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they are not mature enough to create
rules
and follow on it strictly as they take it granted some times to follow those
rules
in
school
because those were created by their own and feel irresponsible as they were not under elder's supervision.
For example
, In most of the
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classroom walls are empty without any useful project charts displayed because
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are not held responsible to do subject projects and create awareness of subject knowledge.
Hence
, student's cannot follow the
rules
.
On the other hand
, others argue that
teachers
should create
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set of
rules
in schools and I totally agree
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that. Because
teachers
are aware
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the
school
principles and
also
the mindset of
children
's.
Teachers
have all the rights to make student's act on those principles very strictly.
For instance
, In my
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our teacher created the rule to collect all the
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homework without missing anyone and should be kept on
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table. So, due to
this
rule
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there will be discipline maintained in
classroom
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the classroom
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without any disturbance of
children
's roaming all over the class.
Thus
,
Teachers
can maintain
rules
in
school
in a
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manner. In conclusion, everyone has their own perspectives with merits and demerits. Personally, I think that
rules
should only create by
teachers
and make
children
follow
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well
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it.
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