Many people argue that in order to improve educational quality continuously, students are encouraged to make comments or even criticism on teachers. Others think the respect and discipline in the classroom will disappear. Which opinion do you prefer?

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Nowadays,many parents think that the educational quality can be improved by encouraging junior to share their feedback or dissatisfactions on their lecturers while others consider they ought to be encouraged to mention moral values inside the classroom.I strongly agree with the statement of mentioning healthy relationship with teachers and obeying their instruction can bring consistent change in the quality of schooling.There are a couple of reasons to support
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of the reasons is junior will learn discipline and they will focus only on their studies.another
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is the professor might lose interest to teach
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if the students criticize them each and every time.
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of the demerits of parents notion about high standard teaching.They are of the opinion that criticising is a tool to bring some improvements to the educational system.If their children start to blame teachers for everything,
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they will lose interest in their junior and they wait for a chance to criticize their schoolteacher.
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undergraduate is poor in their studies,
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he put the blame on his tutor.
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, it is clear that educational institutions should not encourage undergraduate to disrespect the coach in any means and
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will show an impact on the improvements in student learning. Another drawback is a lecturer will lose their interest to teach because if all undergraduate
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about them,it is really hard to teach them.Unless
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these educational establishments find an alternative to improve the standard of learning,
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will remain the same.For instances, if all schools assign a representative to address tutor and pupil concerns,
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would gradually be
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of the changes in existing educational practices. By doing
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hand, educational developments can be noticed.on
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other ,hand there will be a good rapport between graduate and educator. In conclusion,from
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, an argument it is evident that good relation with lectures is significant, in order to make drastic changes in the current practices in school in terms of teaching.So,
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it is obvious that am an advocate of pupil criticising or disrespecting instructor at any means.The government should
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have an eye on all private schools and providing them with guidelines on good practices in schools and colleges.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

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  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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