Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Sometimes it is believed that advertising is effective to encourage us to purchase . While

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other argue that

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are not attracted to advertising. In my view , we can not be

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from

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attraction . In the following essay , both of the views will be discussed. Availability to

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of information to shop because of technology would be the power full reason for notice are influential to persuade

people

to buy.

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, technology and modernization

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been attended by societies and they can be familiar with modern and new productions around the

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by advertising in the technological

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.

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by observing online global magazines and advertisements about cellphone marketing .

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, notice is successful to advise the public to shop because many tools information surrounding the

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are available by universal advertisings .

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advertising would be the fact that the more advertising , the less trust .

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competition between companies and businesses that all of them try to advertise their own marketing and productions to attract customers .So , it is thought that notice can not be

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realistic and is

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reasonable

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reason for shopping .

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amount of the public dissatisfaction in advertising has

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because their shopping

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not according to the goods and services advertised . So ,

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of marketing competitions ,

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fake advertising

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done by companies that

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attention to advertising . In conclusion, in my opinion , despite the fact that some unreal notices can be seen , advertising would be successful to encourage

people

to shop . Because we will rich the useful information and options around the

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for when we tend to purchase something.