Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be spent elsewhere. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this?

Nowadays, a great deal of attention has been paid to the

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. A certain proportion of people opine that the

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should cut budgets that are used for the

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, and use them for other purposes. I strongly agree with the idea because the

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not worth investment, and there are more important areas

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with, the

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reason why I believe the

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should not use the

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for the

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is that they can get fewer returns from the

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.

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, fine

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require lots of

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, and many museums suffer from managing

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for facilities and staffs. In facts, Musse du Louvre rose the entrance fee in 2013 since they needed to prepare

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for a facility

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dedicated to the

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and professional staffs. Despite that cost a lot, the

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hardly produce profits. In fact, 75% of Japanese think that they can enter museums for free. Another reason for supporting my agreement is that there are by far important sectors that need budgets. Take

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,

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, giving good

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for youngsters will rise their future salary, and

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results in increasing national wealth in the future. On top of that, despite the importance of

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, one in seven youngsters in Japan are raised in poverty, and they do not afford to pay tuition for higher

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. In fact, the child poverty rate in Japan ranked at the highest level among OECD countries. In conclusion, I reiterate my complete agreement that the

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should use the budget not for the

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but for others.

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is because the

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can receive fewer returns from the

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, and there are more serious problems that the

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should invest

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as

education

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.