People should choose their course of study not on the basis of their own interests, but based on the kinds of jobs they can get. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Choosing a

career

is vital in

this

society, and

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mostly

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most

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people are

counfused

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confused

what

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about what

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study

and what field they should go with.

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essay is going to argue that

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whether

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wether

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whether

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people should opt for the

study

focusing on the field of

job

or according to their appeal of subjects. I personally believe

both

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to

considered

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when

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the question of your

career

. If someone

look

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ahead according to their

their

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liking of subjects,

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I have

seen people are performing

excellent

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.

Study

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is not easy

specially

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in

this

highest competition era, they need to get

highest

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the highest

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marks in academics to get recruit by multinational companies.

This

is only

possilbe

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possible

if we are studying what we like to

study

,

otherwise

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the future will be boring.

For instance

, one of my

friend

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was interested in music subject, there was a high risk but after some years now he is one of the known

musician

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musicians

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and

get

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highly paid even more than the doctors and engineers.

On the other hand

, if we choose academics according to the

job

we get, we make our future more safe and secure,

ofcourse

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of course

we dream

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of the

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the

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job

which is highly paid and secure

specialy

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speciality

specially

achieveable

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achievable

. Indeed, there is less risk of failure and more chances to get the desired

job

.

For example

, most of my friends did engineering

although

they were not interested in it

but

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still they got

job

immidietly

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immediately

after graduation,

although

it was not highly paid

initially

but

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they are getting a raise every year.

Hence

they have a secured

career

.

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,

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essay discussed

both

the points

,

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and

both

are having

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pros and cons. I believe

both

factors are equally important and need to be considered when choosing your

career

. If we have

a

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desired

job

in mind and good interest in the qualification of that

job

will be

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a cherry

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on

a

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cake.