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The given graph describes the percentage of jobless people around Australia for every 3 months of 2012 in percentage in both cities and countryside. Clearly, there are more unemployed community in a rural area than that in urban.
However
, the amount of
unemployment
 in the countryside reduces by the end of 2012. Regarding the rural family, the lack of a job is highest in the beginning of 2012 with 7% of rural citizens getting jobs.
Nevertheless
, the quota drops to one in twenty people jobless in the final quarter of 2012.
Besides
, the graph for
unemployment
 in rural area fluctuates throughout the year 2012. In terms of urban employment, it is quite the opposite of rural areas. At
first
, the
unemployment
 is merely above 2%,
on the contrary
, the rate increases by 2% more unlike in rural areas. By the end of 2012, both rural and urban field have a pretty similar rate of
unemployment
. In a nutshell, more percentage of people in
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rural area need a job, despite being that the rate of
unemployment
 in cities is
also
 going up. Regardless, there is more cutback in rural areas for the whole year of 2012.
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